And Master KMF-smith as well.
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That was her "Captain Kirk" moment a la when Jim makes a blunderbuss out of bamboo to kill the Gorn.
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And Master KMF-smith as well.
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That was her "Captain Kirk" moment a la when Jim makes a blunderbuss out of bamboo to kill the Gorn.
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The all seeing eye is always watching.
Haha, that too.
What's sad is that they failed to make her sympathetic. She made no effort to identify with Lelouch's plight in canon, or reflect where she went wrong. In fanfics I've seen her come across better.
BTW, writing that letter to the creators right now. Would you mind proofreading it after I finish typing it up?
I wouldn't mind at all.
In fact, if you don't mind I'll beg LadyWarrior to use her grammatical expertise to give it a once over.
Assuming she agrees to it.
Othewise, you'll have to trust my skills...which pale in comparison to hers. :p
The all seeing eye is always watching.
ETA: Nevermind, just split it between three parts.
Last edited by azul120; 08-31-2011 at 09:22 AM.
Wow, you had a lot to say.
I've edited through it the best I am able azul120.
I'm going to attach it here for you to download as a PDF file.
I made quite a few suggestions/"corrections" to your letter as per your request to help you.
The all seeing eye is always watching.
Thanks for the input. Been a little busy in the meantime.
Anyways, guess I should have known this might happen:
http://forum.fanfiction.net/topic/56...32/1/#50368639
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