Rai,
I like your Code Geass fiction. If your aim was to set a mood, then I think you did that very well. It seems to describe two people who are completely comfortable with each other. I agree with Kodai that Kallen and Rai make a great pair, although I have to admit that I haven't played Lost Colors yet. I am basing my opinion on what people have told me about it and on Kodai's characterization of Rai in Dirge of Deadalus. The part that says he closed his eyes, possibly for the final time is intriguing - makes me wonder why you put that in there.

I also like your poem, but I have not seen the anime that you are referring to.

- LadyWarrior